19C Script

Draft:

 

 
Script:

Feedback:

Improvements Made:

- Finished

- Gave my character a clear voice and personality
- Made genre clear by adding more tension and suspense (which conform the stereotypes of a horror film)

Improvements implemented:

- Planned my 3 act structure:
1) Hannah's journey into the forest, meeting her friend
2) Friend disappears, Hannah begins to panic
3) Hannah and Dan are killed on their way out of the forest
- Described my characters clothing
- Added more dialogue

- Removed template from format

For my resubmission I added responses to peer feedback, and updated my script to follow a better format, and make the story flow more.